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About Me Member Procrastinator IllisMale/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 4 Years
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Thu Dec 18, 2008, 11:19 AM
I've taken some time to clear thing out here, maybe now that it's break submit some stuff, however... when did I get 4k views? And while doing nothing here none the less... interesting isn't it?

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  • Current Residence: USA
  • Interests: Church, Music, Photography, Running, Sketching, Soccer
  • Favourite movie: The Godfather (Part 1 of course)
  • Favourite band or musician: You can't do that to me...
  • Favourite genre of music: 80s or anything fast like Punk/Screamo/Thrash Metal... mostly Christian music
  • Favourite artist: M.C. Escher, Vitaly S. Alexius (http://alexiuss.deviantart.com/gallery/)
  • Favourite poet or writer: J.R.R. Tolkien, Frank Herbert, Susan Cooper, Robert Frost
  • Favourite photographer: TJ McKimmey (http://didyouloseasock.deviantart.com/)
  • Favourite style of art: Photojournalism (concerts)
  • Operating System: OSX Leopard
  • MP3 player of choice: Creative Labs - Zen Vision:M
  • Shell of choice: 18 inch main battery round (gunboat)
  • Favourite game: RISK
  • Favourite gaming platform: PC
  • Favourite cartoon character: TROGDOR the BURNINATOR!
  • Personal Quote: "Somewhere between studly and seductive!"-Theresa
  • Tools of the Trade: Nikon D4ox, Adobe CS3 Web Premium

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:iconjohneliason:
Is this like you mean: [link]
I do like that now too. I'm just wondering, what made you want to see it with magenta/purple rather than another color?
Peace.

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Whatever happens, ya live through it. It creates who we are, how we live, and who we become.
:iconillis:
You're getting pretty close there to the feeling that I was shooting for, but it's honestly more about how you're feeling towards the picture.

For my personal taste you made it a bit too contrasted to where you cannot see a lot of the details (and I'm a details guy, it's just my style). Because of the flowers and all of the highlights in the original, I could see this picture in a yellowish / sepia, however the high brick content, the rust, and especially the light/shadow in the alley lead me to the magenta tint and a cooler feeling color scheme. I also think that with some of the older subjects (i.e. your car) it is nice to throw in a little vignetting, and since the subject (car) was in the upper left I decided not to do a standard framing vignette but rather to shift it closer to the subject and run it off the page to move the picture in that direction.

You should compare your original to your edit to my attempt to get my feel and to see if it is or isn't a way that you would personally take this piece. I would recommend opening them all in separate tabs and jumping between each (or download them all to your desktop and open them in some sort of previewer)...

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"Somewhere between studly and seductive."
:iconjohneliason:
Yea, I do like how its darker, its true. I've never gotten into the whole vignetting for pictures. I'll look into it. Thanks sir.

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Whatever happens, ya live through it. It creates who we are, how we live, and who we become.
:iconillis:
best suggestion there is just making a bg layer of black, using an elliptical selection tool with feathering of at least 25px, and then selecting the inverse of your selection and deleting it with backspace.

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"Somewhere between studly and seductive."
:iconjohneliason:
I tried and tried again honestly to remake my original. Honestly I do like my original one more, I like what you've done to it too, but mine fits well with me. Like you said, do what feels right for yourself, I like that.

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Whatever happens, ya live through it. It creates who we are, how we live, and who we become.
:iconjohneliason:
Ooooh, go me, I was your 5,000th pageview.

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Whatever happens, ya live through it. It creates who we are, how we live, and who we become.
:iconjohneliason:
Thanks for the faves. bud. So when does school start up for yerself?

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Whatever happens, ya live through it. It creates who we are, how we live, and who we become.
:iconillis:
Well, you are certainly welcome. Good art should get recognition!

I've haven't written a journal in 3/4s of a year and my last upload was about 16 months ago... I'll probably end up passing... Oh, and I leave for school Wednesday, but it won't be starting for about a week after that (I'm just trying to get there to get a job)

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"Somewhere between studly and seductive."
:iconjohneliason:
good stuff, where do you go to school again?

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Whatever happens, ya live through it. It creates who we are, how we live, and who we become.
:iconillis:
Greenville College (a private Christian College in Greenville, Illinois)

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"Somewhere between studly and seductive."

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